1. The structure - I am pleased with the minor conceit of selecting quotes from within the story to head up each little section. I don't know if anyone else ever noticed that, but I like it.
2. I remember being very firm with myself about showing, not telling, and conveying a lot of the action through dialogue, and I think I did.
3. I'm fond of pretty well all this story, but I think the little bits of Chris/Justin dialogue may just be my favourite parts.
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#47 is A Tale of Dreams and Asses, one of my SeSa stories that year.
Three things I currently like about it:
1. The structure - I am pleased with the minor conceit of selecting quotes from within the story to head up each little section. I don't know if anyone else ever noticed that, but I like it.
2. I remember being very firm with myself about showing, not telling, and conveying a lot of the action through dialogue, and I think I did.
3. I'm fond of pretty well all this story, but I think the little bits of Chris/Justin dialogue may just be my favourite parts.