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meta fiction
Oct. 8th, 2008 09:07 pmI think there should be a Lancey drinking game. Any time she touches him unnecessarily, you drink.
Applying this to the Ellen appearance... would result in swift chugging and rapid inebriation! Lacey cannot keep her hands off Lance! (It's a bit like watching Ellen with the Timberlake, only more so.)
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Anyone for a bit of meta fiction? If you would like to continue the story, pray comment.
Title
Arresting opening sentence of dialogue, unattributed.
Unspoken reaction from point of view character. Cunning establishment of location by reference to recognisable landmark.
Further expostulatory dialogue by non-POV character, now with attribution.
Amicable concurrence from POV character. Suggestion of possible action.
Dialogue-free account of conversation.
Narrative passage describing action, including internal reactions from POV character.
Surprising statement!
End of scene one.
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Applying this to the Ellen appearance... would result in swift chugging and rapid inebriation! Lacey cannot keep her hands off Lance! (It's a bit like watching Ellen with the Timberlake, only more so.)
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Anyone for a bit of meta fiction? If you would like to continue the story, pray comment.
Title
Arresting opening sentence of dialogue, unattributed.
Unspoken reaction from point of view character. Cunning establishment of location by reference to recognisable landmark.
Further expostulatory dialogue by non-POV character, now with attribution.
Amicable concurrence from POV character. Suggestion of possible action.
Dialogue-free account of conversation.
Narrative passage describing action, including internal reactions from POV character.
Surprising statement!
End of scene one.
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