There was action, and character, and development, and emotional growth, all in one chapter!
And I'm amused by your comment on ignorance of fighting being no hindrance. . .indeed, it was not, and if I had written those bits? Well, aside from being quite different, I don't think they would have been nearly as good, even if I could shoot for accuracy. *g*
HUZZAH for the Chronicles, and I would be thrilled to see more of them! (And who are all these names, and what was the token Alyssa received? Will we be finding out soon? I'm probably going to be annoyed with myself when I find/figure out who the Named Folk are...I'm assuming Alyssa is NOT "Milano", heh...
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Date: 2008-04-17 05:55 am (UTC)*applauds*
Oh, VERY well done, and on *so* many levels!
There was action, and character, and development, and emotional growth, all in one chapter!
And I'm amused by your comment on ignorance of fighting being no hindrance. . .indeed, it was not, and if I had written those bits? Well, aside from being quite different, I don't think they would have been nearly as good, even if I could shoot for accuracy. *g*
HUZZAH for the Chronicles, and I would be thrilled to see more of them! (And who are all these names, and what was the token Alyssa received? Will we be finding out soon? I'm probably going to be annoyed with myself when I find/figure out who the Named Folk are...I'm assuming Alyssa is NOT "Milano", heh...