It's strange - having actually reviewed the story, I can't remember why I put it down as a disappointment (and yes, it was only yesterday, but then, I had a Cramp dream this morning - truly! - so clearly my mind is going). I got what I was aiming for, which was strong emotional reaction. So - ? Anyway. Yes - thanks for the feedback!
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branchandroot
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Date: 2006-01-03 11:57 am (UTC)