What You See May Not Be What You Get

[pensnest]

If you have feedback on this story, I'd love to hear from you.

Comments

[likeasunburn.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this very much, thank you for sharing it. =)

[pensnest]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it.

[turloughishere.livejournal.com]

That was both funny and hot and painful! Men, or perhaps more honestly: Humans! Assuming things instead of asking and always assuming everyone else is so much cooler and more experienced than oneself.

I really liked your Justin, he comes through as both selfconfident and divaish and young and uncertain. And as usual I love your Lance voice!

[bun18.livejournal.com]

Hmm it has been a while since I last commented, lets see if I can remember how to do this. ;)

Yay Mum! I liked that story. Funny and hot... except when I read a sentence which reminds me of the way you speak, then I remember it is my mum writing this. Anyway, good job.

Any more of Ser Christopher and Lancyn any time soon?

[pensnest]

Humans! Yeah, I think that's it, really...

Thanks so much for the feedback, as always, it's much appreciated

[pensnest]

I remember it is my mum writing this...

Yep, that's got to be disconcerting! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

No more Chronicles stories for a while, because although I know what they're going to be, I haven't got anywhere near writing them yet. But they will come along, I promise!

[likeasunburn.livejournal.com]

I really did! :) There's not much new (good) Nsync fic these days, especially since I'm a lamb lover and am rather picky about how they're portrayed.

[pensnest]

Cool! I'm glad to know it worked for you. Justin is a character I haven't written much - I tend to be a bit mean to him - so I wanted to do a story in which he isn't unwittingly at the wrong end of a joke, or that kind of thing.

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

Every time I read ending (a) I always get dreadfully curious about the scene where Lance finally lets Justin and Chris know that he was a virgin before they ambushed him. XD;; I mean, I would love to see that scene!

Incidentally, I read ending (b) once and it made me want to cry, so I tend to avoid it like plague now. ^^;;;; I'm terrible with unhappy endings.

[pensnest]

Hi - thanks for the feedback! You've inspired me to think about that scene, though it probably won't come out the way you've imagined it. (Do you write? You could do your own version.) I'll probably post it in 'Awesome August'. (see popsoundboard for details)

Funnily enough, the sad ending is the one I originally intended the story to have—I meant there to be a permanent misunderstanding and that was why they split up... but I didn't like it, I *much* prefer happy endings!

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

*laugh* I try to go into fics without preconceptions but it's so hard! (I'm afraid I don't, but I beta a lot? ^^;; I suck at producing my own work, whether it's for fun or for work, but I love proofreading. Yes, I know, most of the world works in the opposite direction. ;P But it's fun!) Ooooooo! I had no idea popsoundboard existed! *goes to lurk on it* (Hmm, I wonder if they have Chris/Lance fics...)

Awww, that's really heartbreaking. :( But I'm so glad we have a love for happy endings in common hee!

[pensnest]

Oh, there's a lot of satisfaction to be had from beta reading, I think—I've also found it has helped me to improve my own writing.

I'm pretty sure you'll find lots of Trickyfish recs at popsoundboard, if you go back quite a bit there was a spate of 'recs for this pairing' posts. Also, you can check through the no longer active community poprecs_request (it's still available so you can look back through the entries), and in popstoryfinders, which these days is the comm for requesting recs as well as finding particular stories.

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

That's cool! :D

Yep, I am planning to go surfing there today, and I was reading the index of fics from fic_requests earlier today. Mmmm, fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic. ^_____^ I've trawled some of poprecs_request and popstoryfinders already, and that was pretty fun, because I tripped over stuff like Crunked and other superpower AUs. (I hadn't read much genfic before that.) That was several very fun hours. XD

Tonight, more reading, woohoo! I am also lurking on popsoundboard now, so hopefully I'll see it if/when you post the scene we were discussing! ;)

[pensnest]

I was intending to save it for one of the days that *doesn't* have someone else down... but nothing else turned up today so I have posted it. Link is up at popsoundboard. :-)

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

Ooooooo! I saw the post and bookmarked it. Will be checking it on a daily basis, believe me. ;)

Yay! *goes to find it*