Lambs Day: Cocktail Party

[pensnest]

My Lambs Day (Southern Comfort Challenge) story is here. The Feedback link comes back to this page, so do let me know if you enjoyed it.

Cheers.

Comments

[madame-d.livejournal.com]

Heee! Drunky!Lance is my faaaaaaaavourite!

Justin had a momentary vision of Lance, dancing, and shook his head to clear it. And spotted the cocktail menu on the table. Ah.

He's not crazy, Justin, HONEST! :D

A short, bearded mass of spitting, impotent fury, and declaring that he'd never drink another drop of vodka, no way.

*loves on Chris like whoa* Dude. That's such a perfect Chris description. Heeeeeee!

patting the ridiculous-chic silver head of the stylised swan arm on the nearest chair.

Swan arm? *shudders*

"I can feel your ribs!" he said, suddenly indignant. Lance was not supposed to be this thin.

Awww, this made me want to give Justin a hug. He's so UPSET that Lance is thin. Poor puppy. *pets*

and fetched the bottle of Southern Comfort, and drizzled a chilly trail down Justin's spine and into the crease of his ass, and then licked it all up, his tongue hot and supple against Justin's skin

*gulps* Holymotherofgod. I love how stunned and amazed Justin is after the night; like he'd had a religious experience or something. :D

He fell back onto the freshly made bed and laughed like a maniac for ten solid minutes.

*pokes him* HAYE!

*sighs happily* Mmmmmmmmmmm, fluffy, angst-free Lambs, how I adore them. :D

[pensnest]

Swan arm? *shudders*

He stayed at the Sanderson Hotel, and I couldn't help but put him in a penthouse suite, which currently (though probably not back then) looks like this.

Mmmmmmmmmmm, fluffy, angst-free Lambs, how I adore them. :D

Yeah, absolutely! Also, I wanted to see a Lance who wasn't all broken and miserable after the Russia experience.

Thanks for the feedback. :-)

[ephemera-pop.livejournal.com]

off balance Justin! Golden, glowing Lance! Your dialogue fills me with so much joy, and I am in love - and envy - with this para like you wouldn't believe.

"He knows there're people making fun of him, 'C," Justin reiterated patiently. "He heard all the boyband-in-space jokes months ago, he knows there'll be jokes about him not going. Yes, okay, he was—look, I asked him about that, okay? He looked exasperated, you know that thing he does with the eyebrows and the snarky look, like there's something nasty on his shoe? Well, he did that, and said if the late night talk show hosts and the tv comedians had any idea what was really involved they wouldn't think it was a fatuous joke. Yeah, he did say fatuous. He was a bit drunk, you know he gets all vocabulary geek when he's a bit drunk. No, he didn't really care. He said the guys on his crew told him they were real sorry, actually he said they protested about it but with the money not being there it was never going to get anywhere. And the people he met at NASA, they sent messages. He said the people who knew what he'd done didn't think he was a joke, and the people who thought he was a joke were ignorant as shit and he wasn't going to waste time worrying about them. I think that sounds like healthy Lance, right?

[pensnest]

Why, thank you. :-) I wanted not-miserable!Lance, and somehow it wasn't possible to convey this information while they were in the club, but it flowed so happily this way.

[geneli4.livejournal.com]

mmm, nice.... tipsy lambs are so much fun, and so sexy, and mmm, yesh, very nice!

i love this line the best:
"You can feel them better if you take my shirt off."

because, yes. definitely, absolutely, yes.

[pensnest]

Hee - thanks for the feedback. That's the sort of line that would normally be the closer of one of my stories, but somehow this one ended up with an odd sort of structure.

[turloughishere.livejournal.com]

Oooh, lots of wonderful images and sounds in this story - the short angry mass of Chris, Lance shaking his booty on the dance floor, Lance voice in Justin's ear, Lance drizzling Southern Comfort on Justin, Justin laughing after his talk with JC. (And of course Lance is bossy in bed, what did Justin expect :-)

[pensnest]

Well, quite - you'd think he'd have figured that out by now! Glad you liked it (even though it's Lambs!).

[turloughishere.livejournal.com]

I read all your stories! Well, I at least look at them :-) And I know that you'll always write a Lance that I like, no matter what the pairing. (Which reminds me, if you ever want to write more about Lance and Sir Ian I'll be delighted!)