It Pays to Advertise, revised

After a very long time, I have put the revised version of It Pays to Advertise up on my website. It's one of the stories I wrote for MTYG 2007, a Timbertrick AU. In theory I ought perhaps to have made it bigger yet, but I think there has to come a time when I'm willing to say, I'm not gonna write any more, let's post the bugger.

Thanks to nopseud for the beta.

Any feedback would be welcome.