It Pays to Advertise, revised

[pensnest]

After a very long time, I have put the revised version of It Pays to Advertise up on my website. It's one of the stories I wrote for MTYG 2007, a Timbertrick AU. In theory I ought perhaps to have made it bigger yet, but I think there has to come a time when I'm willing to say, I'm not gonna write any more, let's post the bugger.

Thanks to nopseud for the beta.

Any feedback would be welcome.

Comments

[rikes]

Hmm, I can't remember enough details to notice what you've changed, but I did remember the awesome opening scene and it's still there. ♥ It's still hilarious and I love JC alot "".

[pensnest]

Thank you! I can't remember what's changed, now, it has been in flux for such a long time...

[nopseud]

I'm a little sad that you aren't going to make any more changes, but \o/ for posting!

[pensnest]

In the end I figured, I don't remember enough about the advertising industry to do much more and keep it plausible, so, yeah.