pensnest | Feast

So, today I am posting my story for the

cockbertbigbang challenge. \o/

It's a continuation of my Bouquet universe, in which Adam and Lance are in an established relationship. In the run-up to Christmas, Adam thinks Lance is going to invite him to spend the holiday in Mississippi. He's even talked himself into accepting.

But he's wrong. Lance is going to ask if he wants a threesome.

Feast, or, What every gay Jewish boy wants for Christmas, is here on my website, with artwork, or here on AO3.

Feedback from the website goes to my LJ, or you can reply on Dreamwidth if you prefer. *bats eyelashes hopefully*

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From:

dine

how did I not know that a threesome was the perfect gift?

this is wonderful, I loved the whole thing - Lance's thoughtful gift, Adam's stealth in getting Brad's acquiescence and the emergence of bitchy Lance when Brad got snarky. plus, hot hot sex scenes as a major bonus!

sounds like they had far more fun than any meeting the parents trip

From:

pensnest

*grins* Yes, a threesome seems like a fine Adam present. Glad you enjoyed it.

From:

scarlett_o

FTR, I saw this posted and squeaked. I haven't even read it yet. Can't wait to start. :)

From:

pensnest

Hee. I hope it is squeak-worthy.

From:

scarlett_o

Definitely squeak-worthy. *g* Loved, loved, loved it. You know how much I love this series to begin with and this was a great addition.

I do now want to read the story where Adam meets Lance's family. *hinthintnudgenudge*

From:

pensnest

Excellent! I'm so pleased it works.

It'll probably take a while for anything about Lance's family to percolate, but you never know.

From:

sweet_poeia

I love everything in the Bouquet universe, and this is my favorite! In addition to being unspeakably, insanely hot, it's really sweet and funny and, somehow, kind of believable (difficult to pull off with a threesome). The individual voices ring true to me. Brad is snarky and rather shallow, but lovable and well-intentioned (and super pretty). I love the loving, trusting nature of the Adam/Lance relationship. Lance's toppiness and Adam's reaction to said toppiness are delectable. This one goes right into memories. ♥♥♥

From:

pensnest

I love these particular incarnations of the boys, and adding Brad to anything just makes it prettier, really! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.

From:

rikes

So witty and fun! Loved it.

From:

phlox

Yay! Another in your Bouquet universe! You do such a great job getting distinct voices; your characters are complex and interesting. Another really great, sweet, hot, cute, and well-written story! Thank you for sharing (and for continuing to play in this universe)!

I love that Lance was worried about Adam liking his family, not the other way around, and I laughed out loud about the Chinese food at then end being something that they could tell people they'd done for Christmas. :D

From:

casey270.livejournal.com

i love this verse! this was cute & hot & sweet & sexy & perfectly perfect in every way!!

From:

pensnest

Thank you! I'm very fond of Adam/Lance myself, and cute/hotsweet/sexy is just about what I was going for. :-)

From:

idahophoenix.livejournal.com

pensnest! You have surpassed even yourself. I can't tell you how many kinds of happy this fic made me. I love this series (and still wouldn't know Lance if I ended up sitting next to him on an airplane). Each of the characters is so clear and exactly himself. I LOVE LOVE LOVE me some hot bradam--but I think it is very difficult to write a believable and hot threesome, but you've done just that here. There's a fabulous equality to the interaction...and yet the true love thread between Adam and Lance never falters. And I had to read your line about Brad looking like an angry meerkat to my partner...and she laughed her ass off. This is just wonderful in every way ...and omg sparkly buttplugs-illustrated no less. And of course, your art fits perfectly. As Mary Poppins would say: "You're practically perfect in every way!"

From:

idahophoenix.livejournal.com

LOL-I just saw that I'm the second person to tell you you're perfect. Not bad bb, not bad at all.

From:

pensnest

What a lovely comment - thank you so much! It was very interesting trying to keep the right balance as I wrote this, so I'm very glad you think I did. (I saw the sparkly butt plugs advertised somewhere, and thought of Adam, so I had to write the final part...)